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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Danny's Poem

    You're making it so hard for me to be surprised. I can be the real me, no judgement in your eyes. Something about you makes everything seem okay I never ...

    Aug 17, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Cycle

    Wow. I'm totally speechless. That was flat out, all around amazing. Great Job. It kinda reminded my of Avril Lavigne's song, Sk8ter Boi, but thats just me. =] great job ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Myself

    Thanks everyone! Your reviews helped me a lot, and to be honest made my day. :) Galerius- Thank you for the different view you gave me, I really would've never ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ShadowDance: Chapter Two

    OK, so I've read both of your chapters and I would just like to say I'm in love with your story. When you describe things, I love the feel that ...

    Aug 4, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Demon of the Sea

    I liked this a lot. As TaylaChase said, this was very formal, and I like the medieval feel to it. (If that's not what you were going for, please don't ...

    Aug 3, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: that solitary good-bye

    I really liked this. I liked how it really made you think about all the different possibilities and how it was rough around the edges instead of the usual polished ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Run

    Run 1, 2, 3. 1, 2, 3. My feet matched the pace perfectly. I didn’t know where I was going, and it didn’t matter. I was gone. Scenery stared back ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Tainted

    Wow. I loved it. =] Everything fit together perfectly to me. =] good job. WaterVyper really found all the little mistakes, so I can just tell you that you're a ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: End Game

    There is no happy ending, for a broken heart. Emotional heads start spinning, you can tell no one apart. Broken mirrors greet crooked smiles, chanting escapes the corners of the ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Whoever Told You There Was Such a Thing as a White Lie?

    Wow. This was totally incredible. Like Macs said, the emotion just rolled off of it. Your rhythm was a little sketchy, but still great. It just goes to show no ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    Love is but a wisp of the wind, gentle as a baby's touch. Wild as an unexpected sin, goals fall silent to lust. Love is but magic's true form, enticing ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Call Me Suicidal

    Wow. I liked this so much! The way your words twisted into different meanings but you still have a slight idea of what they're really about, well, I mean I ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Eff.

    I think people are missing the point, she wants to share her life experiences, and you can't do that by--as she said-- pleasing everyone. It's like a life Bio. except ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Breakable - Ch. 1 (Part 1)

    OK, so I don't have very much time but I just wanted to say that I really really really LOVED it and I can't wait to read more. I'm very ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Letters Unsent Chapter 3

    And I don't want you to cry. I want you to remember my face. I need you to remember why you fell in love with me. I just want you ...

    Jun 9, 2009


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians